Successful Personal Statement for Graduate School

Your graduate school Statement of Purpose is your last and best chance to present yourself directly, vividly and personally to an admissions committee. It should be reviewed by an editor who was a former graduate school dean who has helped hundreds of prospective graduate students to gain admission to graduate programs with offers of fellowships and scholarships.

In recent years my clients have been accepted by schools like Boston University, Brandeis, University of Chicago, Columbia, Harvard, Stern, Vanderbilt and Yale. When nearly 80% of the applications to highly competitive graduate programs are rejected you need to distinguish your application to be noticed and accepted by an admissions committee. You can get into the school of your choice. The time to start working on your application is now! Contact me to see how together we can achieve your goal.

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